EDITORIAL COMMENTS (all)

cl 1.3	pg 65	line 1

Reference needs to be updated:

IEC 61076-3-113, Ed. 1.0 (draft, 48B/1437/CD, 2 April 2004.) [48B Secretariat 1327] Connectors for 1 electronic equipment—Part 3-113: Screened, serial multi-conductor cable to board connectors suitable for 2 10 Gbit/sec data rates.8 3

8At the time IEEE Std 802.3-2012 was published, IEC 61076-3-113 is a committee draft. This document is available at  (http://www.bsigroup.com/). 


cl 1.3	pg 66	line 16

Reference needs to be updated:

 IEEE Std 802.1FTM-1993 (Reaff 1998), IEEE Standard for Local and metropolitan area networks—Common Definitions and Procedures for IEEE 802 Management Information.

 The latest reaffirmation is 2004. (This standard has been withdrawn)


cl 1.3	pg 66	line 22

Reference needs to be updated:

IEEE Std 802.3.1TM-2011, IEEE Standard for Management Information Base (MIB) Module Definitions for Ethernet. 

Should be updated to 2013 or made undated, preferably the latter.

cl 1.3	pg 66	line 34

Reference may need to be deleted:

IETF RFC 3621 (December 2003), Power Ethernet MIB, Berger, A., and Romascanu, D.11

IETF RFC 4836 (April 2007), Definitions of Managed Objects for IEEE 802.3 Medium Attachment Units  (MAUs), Beili, E. 

Do we still need these given the established existence of 802.3.1?

pg 67	line 37

ISO/IEC 15802-1:1995, Information technology—Telecommunications and information exchange between systems—Local and metropolitan area networks—Common specifications—Part 1: Medium Access 38 Control (MAC) service definition. 

Didn't we put this one in for withdrawal at SC6? Shouldn't we be deleting it here?


Page 68	Line 22 et seq.	
Shouldn't the main reference come before the (untitled) amendment?



BIBLOGRAPHY	Annex A (informative) Bibliography

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[B29] FCC Docket 20780-1980 (Part 15), Technical Standards for Computing Equipment. Amendment of Part 15 to redefine and clarify the rules governing restricted radiation devices and low-power communication devices. Reconsidered First Report and Order, April 1980.

This one is a guess, BUT my guess is that this reference is out of date and we should be working from a newer version.

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[B43] IEEE Std 802.9aTM-1995, IEEE Standards for Local and Metropolitan Area Networks: Integrated  Services (IS) LAN: IEEE 802.9 Isochronous Services with Carrier Sense Multiple Access with Collision 18 Detection (CSMA/CD) Media Access Control (MAC) Service.

Remove this entry or at least harmonize the expression of the title with (a) the actual title of the (withdrawn) standard and (b) the same document as shown in the cl. 1.3 references section (see below)

IEEE Std 802.9aTM-1995, IEEE Standards for Local and Metropolitan Area Networks: Supplement to 30 Integrated Services (IS) LAN Interface at the Medium Access Control (MAC) and Physical (PHY) Layers: 31 Specification of IsLAN16-T. 

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[B49] ISO/IEC TR 29125 (draft), Information technology—Telecommunications cabling guidelines for remote powering of data terminal equipment. Draft document number ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 25 N 874. 

This TR was published as TR29125-2010.  we should not be pointing to a pre-approval draft unless there is some special reason.  As far as I know, there is none.

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[B61] TIA TSB-184 (draft), Guidelines for Supporting Power Delivery over Balanced Twisted-Pair Cabling. Draft document number PN-3-0324A (TIA-TSB 184 D2.0).

This TSB was published as approved in July 2009.  We should not be pointing to a pre-approval draft unless there is some special reason.  as far as I know, there is none.